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"I Am" Poem

Mon Sep 22, 2008, 6:59 PM
"I am funny when I need to be, and persistent when I have to be

I hear Flat on the Floor by Nickelback because I can be that cool.

I see the silver lining of the dark cloud above when I got out to enjoy the rain.

I want a Wii even though I'm not a good gamer.

I say the first thing that comes to mind so long as it makes sense, but doesn't at the same time.

I am Strong when depended upon and gentle when loved and respected.

I feel happy for the first time in a while, because someone else completes me.

I am surprised by the unexpected, even though I expect the unexpected.

I touch the things I love so that I may lose myself in what I do, even if I just need to pass the time.

I worry about my girlfriend, even if it's just to return the favor.

I require a pad and pencil all the time so I may relay my expressions and opinions through art.

I am creative when I'm bored and bored when I am creative.

I understand that the best thrive from the worst because no one's born at the top of the ladder.

I believe that imperfection is the only perfection.

I wonder what life would be like if nothing wrong happened.

I dream to live, and live to dream.

I try to make myself a better person, but find change unnecessary.

I hope for rainy days just so I may walk through them.

I am funny when I feel the need to be, and persistent when I have to be."

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This is a poem that was assigned to me in english III close to the beginning of the year. I got the paper back with a note saying it was one of the best out of all her classes. I felt like I accomplished something X3. And it was pretty fun. I challenge you all to come up with something in an "I Am" poem. I'll give you the format of it down below.

I am...(2 qualities about you)

I hear...(what you hear)((can be anything, just just what you hear at the moment))

I see...(what you see)((can be anything, just just what you hear at the moment))

I want...(what you want)

I say...(what you like to say)

I am...(2 more qualities)((must be different from the first two))

I feel...(what you feel)

I am surprised...(what surprises you)

I touch...(what you touch)

I worry...(what you worry about)

I require...(what you require)

I am...(2 more qualities about yourself)((different from the first four))

I understand...(what you understand)

I believe...(what you believe)

I wonder...(what you wonder)

I dream...(what you dream)((doesn't have to be a dream as in when you sleep. It can also be a goal))

I try...(what you try to do)

I hope...(what you hope for)

I am...(the first 'I am' sentence you wrote)

Enjoy yourselves with it, and let me know what you come up with. I would be more than happy to read it, or answer any possible questions you may have about it. X3

  • Mood: Joy
  • Listening to: out of control by hoobastank
  • Reading: speak
  • Watching: nuthin
  • Playing: Gaia online
  • Eating: bread
  • Drinking: crystal light

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:iconxxxkiyadentrunxxx:
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A long dream. A sad farewell, hanging in the air of that 'world between'.

Be not afraid. Entrust your body to the soothing waves of your memories. By and by your fleeting rest will be over... and everything will begin.
:iconxxxkiyadentrunxxx:
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RULES:
1- You can hug the person who hugged you!
2- You -MUST- hug 6 other people, at least!
3- You should hug them in public! Paste it on their user page!
4- Random hugs are perfectly okay! (and sweet)
5- You should most definitely get started hugging right away

Send This To All Your Friends, And Me If I Am 1.
If You Get 7 Back You Are Loved!

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A long dream. A sad farewell, hanging in the air of that 'world between'.

Be not afraid. Entrust your body to the soothing waves of your memories. By and by your fleeting rest will be over... and everything will begin.
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A long dream. A sad farewell, hanging in the air of that 'world between'.

Be not afraid. Entrust your body to the soothing waves of your memories. By and by your fleeting rest will be over... and everything will begin.
:iconxxxkiyadentrunxxx:
thankies for the :+fav: !!!

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A long dream. A sad farewell, hanging in the air of that 'world between'.

Be not afraid. Entrust your body to the soothing waves of your memories. By and by your fleeting rest will be over... and everything will begin.
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